Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.  Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The difference between countries is disappearing
due to
people
buying the same
goods
anywhere in the world.
Although
the public conveniently shops at a low price, there is a greater negative influence on local culture, even if it will be damaged.
Therefore
, I believe that
this
situation should be prevented from happening in all countries. One obvious advantage to appearing similar
products
all over the world is that it offers
people
easily getting lower price
goods
from other countries. When we want to own something abroad, we usually pay so much money,
such
as travelling expenses, duties and so forth, and waste a lot of time to get it.
As a result
, a large amount of cost and time will be saved if they are sold in my country.
However
, the same
products
existing in every nation will lead to a problem that the special culture will be destroyed. With the growth of living costs, more and more
people
choose cheaper
goods
that are often made by a huge amount of production.
Whereas
particular and traditional things are so hard production that will pay huge prices. To be specific, similar and boring
products
will be
instead
of national
products
in every country where domestic DNA will difficult to find. In conclusion, in the short term,
people
really gain that the cost of
goods
is reduced. in the long term, the civilization belonging to the nation will slowly disappear. Compared with the domestic characteristic dying out, the small cost reduction in the short period is totally unimportant.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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