Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Crimes
and
violence
have more and more it increases and become a daily thing to see in our life. Nowadays, the more
crime
influences
society
, the more
people
will talk about it. Reporting
violence
is necessary to be careful in your daily day and to stay home.
Further
, Even if the
television
or the
newspapers
do not publish,
people
with phone application as Twitter or Instagram will publish what they see.
This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of reporting
crimes
.
To begin
with, the total of
crimes
worldwide is increasing sharply. Because of a conflict with the government, economic issues, or protests. Some kinds of
crimes
need to be reported so
people
have knowledge about what happened in their
society
.
Further
, it will help
people
to be careful, and safe, not go out after midnight, and lock their houses. By reporting
violence
you give your
society
a chance to know that there is a criminal outside and you need to know whom you are dealing with.
Due to
these reasons,
personally
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I think it is advantageous to publish a kind of
violence
on
television
or in
newspapers
.
However
, every coin has two sides. Some
people
will disagree with the publishing of
violence
for different reasons. One reason is that some scenes are harmful and cannot be watched. Another, by publishing
crime
you may motivate others to do their
crime
.
In addition
, some may have psychological issues dealing with
violence
. To illustrate,
society
will disagree with publishing
crime
in
television
or
newspapers
because the scenes might be hurtful and filled with pain.
To sum up
, in the meantime with the new technology not only
television
and
newspapers
that publish
violence
.
Moreover
, with new phones with popular ,applications
people
started to report everything taking action in
society
on Twitter or Instagram or other types of apps. So, it became hard to stop the reporting of
crime
with the new technology
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitize
  • apathetic
  • heightened sense
  • anxiety
  • restricting
  • panic
  • rumor spreading
  • censoring
  • infringe
  • freedom of the press
  • informed public
  • precautions
  • policies
  • balance
  • broadcasting
  • sensitive content
  • exposure level
  • educational content
  • constructive approach
  • societal issue
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