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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is popularly believed that in the fullness of
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 people will avoid buying an original paper,
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 the fact that they will have a possibility to find any free of expenses text on the
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. I completely disagree with
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 statement and I think that buying
books
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 and newspapers will be crucial for folks all the time.
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 with, in recent years it is known that the
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 is well-developed. Students have
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 privilege to find free study materials for learning on
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 platform.
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, it is vital to remember that not every piece of information you are able to find on the
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 is real. To put it more simply, it is the first reason why the original book cannot be replaced. From the point of view of elderly
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 it is virtually impossible. Giving an example, grandparents prefer to choose newspapers or
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 rather than ebooks.
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, they have no idea how to use the
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.
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, they do not find themselves in
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 type of ebook reading.
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, big readers frequently collect hardcover
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. They buy a highly-priced and special publication
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 because they love to possess their own
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.For bookworms, it won't be the same to keep their
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 in the online world as in the real world .
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, a friend of mine read plenty of
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 and she spent a huge amount of money on
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 activity. I asked her once why she didn’t try to find some
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 online. She announced that she had never found herself reading on the
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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that nothing can replace an original book and newspaper in the nearest future.
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