The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart provides information about how people in
Australia
consume the products which are
coffee
and tea in five areas in
Australia
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Australian went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in the
last
4 weeks much more than buying fresh and instant
coffee
in the same period of time.
To begin
, the highest proportion in consume
coffee
and tea at cafes is shown in Hobart at around 63% and the rate is the same as in Melbourne.
Next,
stood of buying fresh
coffee
is around 42% and
then
, in Melbourne, there are slightly lower rates than the former at around 1%.
Moreover
, the lowest of buying fresh
coffee
is Brisbane which is just under 35%. In terms of buying instant
coffee
in
Australia
in the
last
4 weeks, the highest rate is just under 55% in Hobart. In comparison, the percentage of going to
coffee
shops had the largest trend,
then
the second trend is buying instant
coffee
and the lowest trend is buying fresh
coffee
in each city in
Australia
.
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