The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

#results #survey #people’s #coffee #tea #habits #five #australian #cities

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The bar chart provides information about how people in

Australia

Use synonyms

consume the products which are

coffee

Use synonyms

and tea in five areas in

Australia

Use synonyms

Overall

Linking Words

it is clear that

Linking Words

Australian went to a cafe for

coffee

Use synonyms

or tea in the

last

Linking Words

4 weeks much more than buying fresh and instant

coffee

Use synonyms

in the same period of time.

To begin

Linking Words

, the highest proportion in consume

coffee

Use synonyms

and tea at cafes is shown in Hobart at around 63% and the rate is the same as in Melbourne.

Next,

Linking Words

stood of buying fresh

coffee

Use synonyms

is around 42% and

then

Linking Words

, in Melbourne, there are slightly lower rates than the former at around 1%.

Moreover

Linking Words

, the lowest of buying fresh

coffee

Use synonyms

is Brisbane which is just under 35%. In terms of buying instant

coffee

Use synonyms

Australia

Use synonyms

in the

last

Linking Words

4 weeks, the highest rate is just under 55% in Hobart. In comparison, the percentage of going to

coffee

Use synonyms

shops had the largest trend,

then

Linking Words

the second trend is buying instant

coffee

Use synonyms

and the lowest trend is buying fresh

coffee

Use synonyms

in each city in

Australia

Use synonyms

Submitted by evetanyaporn on Thu Mar 23 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, coffee with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

▼

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

178 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Compared to past, more people are now trying to learn a foreign language to increase their chances of landing a better job in their native country or to have better opportunities to work abroad. To what extent do you agree with this point of view?
In comparison to old era, a large number of natives nowadays are learning non-native languages with an aim of getting better employment opportunities locally and internationally. I totally agree with this statement because it helps international job seekers in adapting seamlessly to foreign culture , and also increases employment perspectives for locals in lights of globalization.
6
band
The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It has been claimed that, like smoking, mobile phones should be banned in some places due to their harmful effects. While I accept that the use of mobile phones is antisocial in some ways, I believe it has more benefits and therefore, should not be prohibited.
8
band
Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
There is considerable debate about whether homeschooling or attending school is the best environment for a child’s development. From my perspective, both options have their own advantages and disadvantages, but I believe that attending an academy is the better choice.
7
band
In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
The trend of homeowners searching for historical information about their homes is becoming more and more popular in many countries. This tendency can be attributed to some definite reasons and there are several ways people can do this.
5.5
band
What precautions can people take to reduce the spread of food-borne illnesses? rite a cause-and-effect essay which explains the causes and potential effects of harmful bacteria in foods, and how the read of such bacteria can be avoided. Provide recommendations for changes a person can make to reduce the spread food-borne illness.
The industrial revolution has taken the society to another level. It had a significant impact on agriculture. However, it has also led to the emergence of many food-borne illnesses.This can be prevented by following specific guidelines.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Compared to past, more people are now trying to learn a foreign language to increase their chances of landing a better job in their native country or to have better opportunities to work abroad. To what extent do you agree with this point of view?

The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?