Some people think that money is the best gift to give to youngsters while other disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Several
people
believe that giving presents in cash
is most favourable to be given to children
, however
some Add a comma
,however
people
oppose the idea. Giving money becomes very common nowadays even to the younger ones, but it is not helpful for them because, at a young age, children
do not know the value of money yet. In my opinion, it is better to offer age-appropriate gifts to the young.
On almost all occasions, such
as birthdays, christenings, and anniversaries everyone should know the importance of giving gifts, especially to children
. It is not uncommon to see now that some people
tend to offer their gifts in cash
because that is
the easiest way to prepare a presentation. As the majority are busy most of the time, bringing hard cash
became handy. Additionally
, it is convenient for some because they do not need to go to the mall and waste a day to find a toy or a dress and then
wrap it up.
On the other hand
, giving a present to the younger children
in a monetary form does not make them appreciate it. It is very unlikely that children
would prefer to be given cash
as their birthday gift because they do not know yet how to spend it. Moreover
, children
most of the time are attracted to colourful and moving things like robots, dolls, and mini cars. Add the comma(s)
,children
Therefore
, some people
would not agree with the objective of offering monetary aid as a gift.
In conclusion, gift-giving is very popular in today's time and age, but it should be child-friendly. I disagree with the thought of giving money to children
because it is not the best way to spoil them. I believe the best gift we can offer to the young ones is something that they really like and dream of having.Submitted by yzevahc13 on
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