Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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enjoy using smartphones.

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, by overusing mobile devices,

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’s communication skill development and precious family

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will be reduced. High technology devices

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as smartphones play an important role not only in an adult’s life

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in the new generation

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life. Some might support that smartphones provide opportunities and useful knowledge to these

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.

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, the number of newly released IOS or android games increased sharply through these years.

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number indicates that more and more

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used their phones for entertainment purposes.

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, surprisingly, my nephew’s screen

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shows 3 times higher than that

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mine, mostly on an online streaming platform.

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many people show no concern toward

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situation, I held the opposite idea. There are several negative consequences resulting from overusing a mobile device in

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. Because watching live streamings and playing games are one-way communication,

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will not be able to develop their social skills properly.

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, a game-addicted adolescent could not fluently express his or her ideas in class.

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,

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spent on these devices will run over precious

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with their parents. Through interacting with real people,

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can learn new skills

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as speaking and listening.

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, when I was young, my mom used to read me bedtime stories. Currently, influenced by those story books, I love to read a variety of books, fiction or non-fiction. In conclusion, even though high-technology communication tools are convenient and useful

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because young kids are blindly overusing these innovations,

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, it could have a negative impact

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of a positive one.