The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.

The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.
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The chart and table detail the differences in the proportion of hospital beds and health expenditure
along with
the average life expectancy among some countries.
Overall
, a country's spending on health is inversely proportional to its beds available for the citizens and their life expectancy. A closer look at the graph reveals that 75% of the countries mentioned could provide only 4 hospital bunks for every thousand people.
However
, that number is doubled in Germany, and in Japan, it reaches the highest point of 14 hospital bunks per thousand of the population. The table shows that the US spends the highest amount of money on healthcare ($6719 per person), but its population has a life expectancy of only 78.
In contrast
,
although
the Japanese have the least expenditure on
this
area, they can live up to an average of 83 years, 3 years longer than citizens of the Netherlands who spent $900 more it on.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • healthcare resources
  • life expectancy
  • per capita
  • modern medical equipment
  • correlate
  • accessibility
  • average lifespan
  • healthcare policies
  • government healthcare spending
  • disparities
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • global health inequalities
  • technological advancements
  • telemedicine
  • AI diagnostics
  • health outcomes
  • public health initiatives
  • vaccination programs
  • preventive healthcare
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