The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.

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The chart and table detail the differences in the proportion of hospital beds and health expenditure

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the average life expectancy among some countries.

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, a country's spending on health is inversely proportional to its beds available for the citizens and their life expectancy. A closer look at the graph reveals that 75% of the countries mentioned could provide only 4 hospital bunks for every thousand people.

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, that number is doubled in Germany, and in Japan, it reaches the highest point of 14 hospital bunks per thousand of the population. The table shows that the US spends the highest amount of money on healthcare ($6719 per person), but its population has a life expectancy of only 78.

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the Japanese have the least expenditure on

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area, they can live up to an average of 83 years, 3 years longer than citizens of the Netherlands who spent $900 more it on.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

healthcare resources
life expectancy
per capita
modern medical equipment
correlate
accessibility
average lifespan
healthcare policies
government healthcare spending
disparities
developed countries
developing countries
global health inequalities
technological advancements
telemedicine
AI diagnostics
health outcomes
public health initiatives
vaccination programs
preventive healthcare

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The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.

Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative impacts on society and should be banned, while others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the gap between the rich and the poor is widening. What problems does this situation cause, and what solutions can you suggest?

nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why this happens? Is it a positive or negative development?

some people say that fashion affects our lives in a negative way. However, others say that it has more positive effects on our lives. discuss both views and give your opinion.