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ome people think teaching situation of teachers and students in a classroom will no longer exist, do you agree or diagree.

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some
people
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 think the teaching
situation
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 of
teachers
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 and
students
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 in a classroom will no longer exist and I disagree with
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 opinion. on the one hand, the teaching
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 of
teachers
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 and
students
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 on the internet will exist by the year 2025,it may bring some advantages.
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,when
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study
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 online,it means they do not need to use the papers that they can
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 on their iPad or computers,it is more eco-friendly for the environment.
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, it can promote the technology innovation because compies should improve their technology to avoid accidents happen in online classes ,
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 ,it
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 can help country technological development.
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.the online classroom is very convenient because it is no time and place limit, workers and disabled
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 can learn online. one the other hand ,the teaching
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 of
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students
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 on the internet
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 will lead to some disadvantages.
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, when
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study
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 online at their home,it will affect
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 efficiency,because when
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study
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 online, they may probably be influenced by computer games so that
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 can not concentrate on their studies .
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 when
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study
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 online,it means they could not meet each other very frequently,
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 ,it is not benefits for young
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 to communicate with other
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 it is bad to improve their social skill,and it does not conduce to maintain the friendship.
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, if children use the computer to
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 for
long
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 time ,it is bad for their eyesight
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 , young
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 are easily influenced by what they constantly see and listen to,so the government have the responsibility to protect children get away from the internet. in conclusion, I disagree that the teaching
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 of
teachers
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students
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 in a classroom will no longer exist .

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