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Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others like groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #lessons #groups
Some individuals like
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class
that
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in that
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 a
teacher
teachs
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teaches
teach
 only
one
student
, meanwhile there are some people
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who choose
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the
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a
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class
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in that
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that
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where
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 the
teacher
 has more than
one
student
 in the
class
.
This
 essay will discuss both ideas and prove which thoughts are more recommended. On the
one
 hand, studying in
the
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a
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class
that
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where
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 only
one
student
 can occupy the
teacher
 can provide
more
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a more
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 efficient
class
 because the
student
 can have
deeper
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a deeper
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 relationship with the
teacher
 and does not need to consider
about
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other classmates in the
class
.
For instance
, when I was taking an English
class
 that a
teacher
 taught only me, the
teacher
 was familiar with my shortcomings so that he could give
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useful
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 and
the
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practical
advices
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advice
pieces of advice
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.
Also
, I did not hesitate to ask any questions
any
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at any
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 time without worrying about other students because there was only me in the
class
.
On the other hand
, having
the
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classmates definitely motivate us to maintain
to learn
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learning
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 in
the
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apply
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class
. Especially, if we face
in
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apply
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the
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a
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 problem
while
 studying, we can share
the
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our
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 toughness and our feeling because the
teacher
 might be not able to catch up
what
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with what
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 students feel
completetly
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completely
.
For example
, I gave up asking a question to a
teacher
 because I could not get
clearly
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it clearly
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 even though I asked many times.
However
, a classmate who had struggled in
same
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the same
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 place could share how to
solve
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,
then
 it cleared up.
To conclude
, the
class
 that we can learn
as
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apply
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one
-on-
one
benefit
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benefits
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 us because of learning
sufficently
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sufficiently
 but people who learned together helped and motivated us in many ways.
Hence
, personally, I recommend
to take
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taking
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 the
class
 with others rather than alone.
Submitted by Sunbear on

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