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Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others like groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some individuals like
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teaches
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one
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other classmates in the
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, when I was taking an English
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 that a
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practical
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, I did not hesitate to ask any questions
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, I gave up asking a question to a
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, a classmate who had struggled in
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 us because of learning
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 but people who learned together helped and motivated us in many ways.
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