A neighbour has caused damage to your car. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter - Describe the damage - How the damage influences your life - Suggest what actions he/she should take about it
Dear Mr Black,
I am writing to complain about an incident which happened to my
car
last
week by your children.
Firstly
, I would like to describe the damage
to my car
. Last
week, your children played a
cricket with their friends near my home. During playing, the ball was hit two times to my Remove the article
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car
's front glasses. As a result
, it was broken and all pieces of it was fallen into my car
. This
damage
was really upsetting to me.
Secondly
, I would like to explain the effect of this
damage
. Being from a middle-class family, I am only
breadwinner of my family, so it Correct article usage
the only
difficult
to run the family. And to add on Add a missing verb
is difficult
this
, I have seen this
car
damage
last
week, which was very ruin
to my monthly income. Replace the word
ruining
Additionally
, tomorrow we will plan to go to my uncle's house by car
because we do not go there for a long time. We might change our plan to go by public transportation.
Lastly
, I would request you not to play a
cricket in near Remove the article
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to
my home and Change preposition
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also
request you to tell your children to play on a cricket ground.
I look forward to receiving your explanation. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Milav
Correct your spelling
Milan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
