The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
hours
that Chinese
, American
, Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
used per day
to do 3 activities (At the beach, Reading books
, Visiting
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and Visiting
places
) on a holiday in Greece in August 2019.
Overall
, the tourists
spent most of their time
reading books
while
visiting places
had the least amount
of hours
that tourist spent time
on it. Chinese
and American
tourists
spent highest
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the highest
amount
of time
on
reading Change preposition
apply
books
. Whilst the Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
used most of their time
at the beach.
In term
of reading Fix the agreement mistake
terms
books
, Chinese
and American
tourists
were
spent the longest Unnecessary verb
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time
on it about 8 hours
and 5 hours
each day
. Which
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apply
Chinese
tourists
spent a
double the Correct article usage
apply
amount
of time
on
reading Change preposition
apply
books
compare to Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
which only spent 4 hours
on
reading Change preposition
apply
books
.
On the other hand
, Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
spent most of their time
in a day
at the beach around 5 hours
and 6 hours
per day
. Which in
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In
Brazilian
was double time
spent compared to Correct article usage
the time
Chinese
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the Chinese
which
spent their Correct pronoun usage
who
time
around 3 hours
per day
. Furthermore
, the highest number of hours
spent on visiting places
were
about 3 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
hours
per day
in
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by
American
and Turkish
tourists
which
none of Correct word choice
and
tourists
spent more than 3 Add an article
the tourists
hours
on
visiting Change preposition
apply
places
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, hours, chinese, american, turkish, brazilian, tourists, day, books, places, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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