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Plastic bags, plastic bottles,plastic packings are bad for the environment.What damage does do to the environment.What can be done government and individual to sove the problem?

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In the modern world ,most useful materials are made of plastic.Undoubtedly they have a negative shock on the surroundings.
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 the products are good-looking, lightweight and cost-effective compare to other sources , they are the cause of soil and water pollution which is detrimental to the existence of living beings , the fauna and the marine world. Moulded products are eye-catching, lightweight and cost-effective.They are maximum adoption
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 various colours' availability and durability. All classes of people can buy.
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 ,From the kitchen appliance,decoration materials, electronics, equipment covers and most of the manufacturers and even grocery shops for packing and delivery.After using the things ,the waste plastic has a negative impact on the environment as they allow
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to decompose in soil for years together.As a ,result the landfill is filled up with waste plastic and runs out of space.The marine space
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 filled with elastic which has a bad impact on the fish and other species.The city's waste plastics reach there through drains
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and rivers.The greenhouse gas increases and
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 climate change. It became a global problem now.The local administration has to come up with strict regulations for the use of
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 products now.The government
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 encouraged replacing it by using natural material which can be recycled quickly and a special education program might be adopted to educate people to overcome it.By doing
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,New jobs can be generated.
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 ,in India now single elastic is prohibited in
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.As An Individual one have to understand the rapid and serious impact of the consequence. In Conclusion,no doubt
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has a negative effect on the environment.
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 of maximum
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 their long-lasting,less weight,and low cost, they have a chain of bad effects on the environment.Government and Individuals have to put their sincere efforts to save
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 beautiful planet and hand it over to the future generation.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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