Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines does this develoment has more advantages or disadvantaged.

To begin

, with the start of the 21st

century

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most of the household activities done previously using physical strength are being replaced by machines.

According to

my point of view, I believe that the usage of new technology and instruments provide more advantages than disadvantages.

Firstly

, everything evolves with time and there's no exception for the above-mentioned matter as well.

Furthermore

,

due to

the research and innovations being conducted by the scientific community, most of our daily activities have become much more efficient and convenient. For an instance, about a century back, people washed their clothes using their limbs but, with the invention of washing machines people were able to perform

this

effectively and in a shorter period. Compared to the late 1800s, at present both men and women are engaged in full-time jobs regardless of their gender

hence

they are not in a position to spare hours to run

such

errands.

On the other hand

, people were a lot more healthy when it comes to communicable diseases like high cholesterol levels, diabetes, and heart attacks back

then

as they were hard-working every day

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today. Now we prefer to get things completed through equipment rather than burning their physical strength. Most of the jobs are mainly focused on sitting in front of a computer mostly.

Also

, soft skills

,

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and logical thinking abilities

also

develop when using electronic items less frequently.

To conclude

, we cannot completely deny and live without new technological developments and machinery

due to

our busy schedules. But, it is very beneficial to maintain our physical and mental

well being

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