The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
presents
bar chart illustrates information about the Change the noun form
present
expenditure
of the government's
in UAE. The total amount of Change noun form
government
budgets
is 315 Fix the agreement mistake
budget
billion
. From an overall
perspective, it's clearly
that, there is have 10 sectors, and Replace the word
clear
many
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any
portion
of the pie chart's spending money Change to a plural noun
portions
expenditure
shows excessive
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an excessive
amount
.
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amounts
To begin
with, the
social security, health and personal social services, education, and Correct article usage
apply
defense
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defence
expenditure
a significantly different from others. And they are demonstrate
respectively 100, 53, 38, and 22 AED Change the verb form
demonstrate
billion
. In addition
, every part of the money goes for
distinguishing segments of the country.
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to
On the other hand
, other
six Correct article usage
the other
part
of the chart divides into Fix the agreement mistake
parts
a
small portions. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Firstly
, the housing and environments
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environment
spends
AED 15 Change the verb form
spend
billion
, debt interest and other expenditure
illustrates
us same measures 23 Change the verb form
illustrate
billion
. Law and order AED 7 billion
and industry, agriculture
shows respectively less Correct word choice
and agriculture
for
Change preposition
apply
billion
than love and order. Eventually
most law trend Add a comma
,Eventually
is transport
, and Change the verb form
is transported
is transporting
expenditure
is 9 billion
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