some people believe that allowing children to make their ownchoices on everyday matters such as food,clothes and entertainment is likely to resultin a society of individaulswho only think about their own wishes.Other people believes that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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has become a seriously debatable issue that divides people into two groups.The first one believes that giving a

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control in his life probably will result in

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the second group supposes that it will lead to creating an independent

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the contemporary epoch that we are living in, it is undeniable that the new generations are totally different from those previous to them,especially children

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of their exposure to hi-tech during the day.

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, the majority of parents think that giving a

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control over their life, including serious aspects of his day .

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as what he eats, and wears

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what he does during the day ,has a negative impact on the character of the

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,who he will be growing into.

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, obeying your son or daughter in the kind of food ,which they would like to have ,results in only eating unhealthy food .

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,will affect their body negatively.

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will lead to a generation ,who see their requisites in life as orders ,which have to be accomplished.Leading to selfish children non-caring,as well.

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, another group of people supposes that giving a

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the opportunity to make their choices ,which usually will be on a small scale, have a positive effect on the

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they want to raise.To illustrate, making a

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believes that he choose something,which he wants badly,is going to have two good effects.

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will encourage the

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to be more autonomous,which is a trait you want your kid to have.

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, he will learn from his mistakes ,as a trial is the best teacher.

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, he will be convinced by the results he has done himself.

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, raising a

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is a difficult process,which differs from one

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to another.

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personally, I believe giving

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space for choices and mistakes to a

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’s advantages outweigh the disadvantages of over control your

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