You are moving to a new city for work and have just realized that an old friend lives in the city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Ask them for advice in finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

#city #work #friend #lives #advice #accommodation #type #place #addresses #___

Dear Adam Hope you and your family doing well! how is your study going ?It is been a

while

since the

last

time I spoke with you and I almost forgot to tell you that I will be moving to

London

next week and just came to my mind you

also

living in

London

city,Please give me some advice and suggestion as

this

is the first time I will be visiting in

London

, Please give me your opinion on finding accommodation in

London

as I do not have any Idea where to start and I would like to live on the outskirts of

London

because I am sure that the rent will be very expensive inside the city. I am looking for a Morden studio apartment with all amenities, the size of the apartment does not matter because I will be planning to live alone but the most important is the apartment should be easy access to public transport. I hope you can help me with all my queries and I will see you very soon! Take care, Sam

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7 paragraphs

179 words

8.50

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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