The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
table illustrates the production of
milk
in four different countries from 1990 to 2010. The Netherlands has been leading throughout these years, and Guatemala remains in the same place as in the '90s and '2000s The Netherlands has increased the
amount
of
milk
a bit since 1990 by two hundred
thousand
litres
. In the begging, it was around 11 million 260
thousand
litres
of
milk
, but the
amount
has increased to about 11 million and 470
thousand
litres
in 2010.
However
, in Australia, the
amount
of
milk
decreased by about 2 million
litres
throughout these years. Tanzania had the second lowest number of
litres
, with 155 hundred
thousand
litres
in 2010. The lowest spot on
this
table is Guatemala with 84
thousand
litres
in 2010. throughout these twenty years, the
amount
of
milk
increased by almost 3.5 times.
This
is the highest growth on
this
table in terms of times.
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