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Some people like to spend their leisure time after work with their co-workers while others like to keep their private life separate from work. Discuss both sides. Give your opinion.

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One of the social concerns today relates to
leisure
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time
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 after
work
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.
While
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 it is widely believed that
people
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 spend their
leisure
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time
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 after
work
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 with their co-workers talking about their job, company and their families, others believe
people
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 keep their private
life
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 separate from
work
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 to spend their
leisure
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time
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 with family and
friends
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. In my opinion,
people
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 should balance perhaps
work
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 and
life
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, take care of family and hang out with
friends
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. On the one hand, it is argued some that
people
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 spend their
leisure
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time
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 after
work
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 with their co-workers talking about their job, company and their family.
Firstly
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,
that is
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 a place to share knowledge, and skills about jobs to
work
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 better. It is
also
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 possible to say that co-worked is a friend to share about family, bringing up
children
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 and taking care of parents. One good illustration of
this
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 is talking about the job of a wife or husband, the
life
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 of parents.
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, co-worked
also
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 have
children
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, they have experience in bringing up
children
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 and ways to help them grow up better.
For example
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, yesterday my co-worker shared about bringing up
children
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 when them is teenagers and looking after their study result of them. I think it is really difficult.
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, it is strongly believed by others that
people
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 keep their private
life
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 separate from
work
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 to spend their
leisure
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time
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 with family and
friends
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.
People
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 often have
this
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 opinion because everybody needs a private place without
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 than 8 hours in a company. A second point is that they need to take care of their parents and
children
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, spend their
leisure
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time
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 playing sports, and hang out for coffee with
friends
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. A particularly good example here is I usually meet
friends
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 to play sports to help me decrease stress and be healthier. In conclusion,
people
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 need to balance middle
work
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 and
life
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 to help all relationships bring happier. Personally, I tend to believe that we need to spend
leisure
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time
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 doing things beneficial.
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