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Living In A Country Where You Have To Speak A Foreign Language Can Cause Serious Social And Practical Problems

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Nowadays, the number of men and women who want to go abroad for a living is increasing.
Moreover
,
this
 will cause some
problems
such
 as social
problems
 and practical
problems
. I will explain these
problems
 in
this
 article. The first social problem is that you can'
t
 make a friend and connect with others to talk and go out.
Therefore
, you will get homesick which is known as famous sick among immigrants. The second problem is that
job
 opportunities are less for you than native people because of language knowledgable.
For example
, in Quebec province, you need to know both English and French languages to find a
job
 that's why many girls and boys can'
t
 find a
job
.
As a result
, they will be facing financial
problems
. The third problem is that you misunderstand laws and other important signs in street because of language.
For instance
, in Quebec's metro station, they give a warming alarm in french.
Moreover
, if you don'
t
 know french, so, you even can'
t
 take care of yourself in the metro.
On the other hand
, the population believes that some tools like "
Google
 maps " and "
Google
 translate " can help us to understand and make a connection.
However
, even when you use translate, it's still possible that you can'
t
 say the exact meaning of words because it's possible to get sentences from
Google
 translate with the wrong sentence meanings and Grammarly.
In addition
, the local people can guide you in a better way than
Google
 maps. In conclusion, living oversea has some
problems
 that we have to find solutions for them that make us have a better life, family, friend, and
job
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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