You recently enjoyed a meal at an expensive restaurant, and you were impressed with the good service you received. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: ● Explain the circumstances of your visit to the restaurant. ● Describe the service you received. ● Say what you would like the manger to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for the exceptional services that I received at your restaurant.
During my visit to the Legend Restaurant last
Friday, I had the pleasure of enjoying a truly remarkable meal. This
occasion was particularly special as I was celebrating my birthday party with my family. The decision to choose your restaurant for this
event turned out to be an excellent on
.
From the time I stepped through the door, I was welcomed with warmth and hospitality. The staff's attention to detail and dedication to providing a high standard of service have been evident throughout the evening. Correct your spelling
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Additionally
, I was particularly impressed by the culinary delights. The meal itself was an exquisite journey of flavours. The dishes were masterfully presented, showcasing the expertise of the culinary team. The presentation was artful and the attention to taste and quality has been evident in every bite.
I would appreciate it if you help me to transfer my gift and gratitude to your entire team. The commitment to delivering an exceptional service has left a lasting impression on me and such
exemplary services deserve recognition.
Once again, thank you for providing me with unforgettable
evening.
Kind regards,
Lana NguyenAdd an article
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To improve your complete response score, make sure your letter addresses all parts of the prompt equally. While you did well to cover the required points, the section on what you would like the manager to do could be expanded. Be more specific about what action or recognition you are seeking.
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For a better logical structure, ensure a smooth flow of ideas from one paragraph to the next. Using transition words and phrases can help link the paragraphs more clearly.
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Maintain a warm and formal greeting and closing, but you might consider personalizing it if you know the manager's name. This can make your letter feel more directed and personal.
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To strengthen coherence, maintain a clear theme or idea within each paragraph and ensure there's a logical progression of ideas throughout your letter.