The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides
There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the fact that the
growth
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has increased people's opportunities to go abroad. Use synonyms
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Although
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viewpoint has advantages and disadvantages, it may be more advantageous than harmful.
Without a shadow of a doubt, the expansion of budget Linking Words
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holds significance for the country's economy. The economy has benefited greatly from tourism, which has been greatly boosted by Use synonyms
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For instance
, in 2001, AirAsia began providing inexpensive international travel, which contributed to the Linking Words
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, there are some restrictions on the Linking Words
growth
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pollution since each aircraft uses a lot of fuel and releases a lot of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. In order to address Use synonyms
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pay certain fees in order to support programs that are meant to improve the quality of the Use synonyms
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in the US has put comparable measures in place to reduce adverse environmental effects. Use synonyms
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action effectively addresses environmental issues.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs for better flow.
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Develop your counterarguments a bit more to strengthen the balance of the essay.
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Provide a more detailed conclusion summarizing both sides before giving your final opinion.
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The essay presents a clear and relevant thesis statement at the beginning.
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Specific examples, such as AirAsia and Southwest Airlines, effectively support your points.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the essay is mostly clear, allowing readers to follow the arguments.
Your opinion
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