The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

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The given line graph illustrates the sum of people visiting a Caribean Island from 2010 to 2017.

It is clear that

the total of visitors staying on export and staying on islands has

upward

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an upward

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trend over the period of 7 years. From 2011 to 2012, the number of visitors travelling by ship witnessed a dramatic fall

while

the opposite was true for that of people who stayed on the island increased significantly. the figure for travellers on the island remained unchanged in both two years between 2010 and 2011

while

, people staying on cruise export grow gradually. The year 2012 witnessed a dramatic growth from 0.5 to nearly 1.5.

However

, the figure for tourists staying on cruise export decreased

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half in 2011. 3 years later, the figure for tourists in total jumped strongly to around 2.8 in 2015 and it was stable in 2016. The highest statistic of visitors staying on cruise transfer was 2 in 2017.

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