The diagram shows the process of water treatment

The diagram shows the process of water treatment
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The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the treatment of the
water
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.
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,the steps involve 10 stages beginning from where the
water
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enters the intake screen and is
then
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pumped into other stages and ends with the faucet. The
water
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from the ocean enters the pumps through the intake screen and it's pumped into the flash mix which contains poly aluminium chloride and oxidants and mix with it. It
then
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leaves the flash mix and
flows
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into the flocculation
chamber
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it
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moves into the settling basin where the larger particular settles at bottom of the basin . The
water
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then
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moves into another
chamber
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containing chlorine and from there it
flows
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into the filter membrane where the
water
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is filtered leaving the remaining particles in the
water
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in the
chamber
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while
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the filtrate (
water
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)
flows
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into another
chamber
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containing Chlorine,lime or sodium hydroxide, and fluoride which disinfects the
water
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that
flows
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there. It
then
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moves into the pump where it is pumped into the faucet for the consumption of the community.
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