The diagram shows the process of making the soft cheese
The diagram illustrates how to make soft
cheese
. The ingredients are water, milk, salt, and water. There are five steps, namely mixing, cooling, fermentation, vaporation
, and cooling.
Correct your spelling
evaporation
The first
step
is to mix the water and milk, the mixing is still in the liquid. Cooling is the second process it, will take two hours
at 5 Celcius degrees
and the form is still liquid after that put salt before the next step
namely fermentation. In the fermentation step
, it needs to be heated and it needs two hours
at 35 celsius degrees
, and the form will turn into a thick liquid. Evaporation becomes the next stage of the soft cheese
process, in this
step
, the materials will be heated and steamed for eight hours
at 100 celsius degrees
. The last
step
is cooling, in this
step
, the ingredients will separate into two different lines, the first one become soft cheese
, and the other one become
wastewater. To make soft chees it needs eight Change the verb form
becomes
hours
at 5 celsius degrees
.
The essential steps in making cheese
are five and the steps have the process such
as mix and heat
. The time and the temperature need to be precise to get the soft Wrong verb form
heating
cheese
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