The diagram shows the process of making the soft cheese

The diagram shows the process of making the soft cheese
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The diagram illustrates how to make soft
cheese
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. The ingredients are water, milk, salt, and water. There are five steps, namely mixing, cooling, fermentation,
vaporation
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evaporation
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, and cooling.
The first
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step
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is to mix the water and milk, the mixing is still in the liquid. Cooling is the second process it, will take two
hours
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at 5 Celcius
degrees
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and the form is still liquid after that put salt before the next
step
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namely fermentation. In the fermentation
step
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, it needs to be heated and it needs two
hours
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at 35 celsius
degrees
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, and the form will turn into a thick liquid. Evaporation becomes the next stage of the soft
cheese
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process, in
this
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step
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, the materials will be heated and steamed for eight
hours
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at 100 celsius
degrees
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. The
last
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step
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is cooling, in
this
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step
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, the ingredients will separate into two different lines, the first one become soft
cheese
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, and the other one
become
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wastewater. To make soft chees it needs eight
hours
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at 5 celsius
degrees
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. The essential steps in making
cheese
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are five and the steps have the process
such
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as mix and
heat
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heating
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. The time and the temperature need to be precise to get the soft
cheese
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese, step, hours, degrees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pasteurization
  • harmful bacteria
  • heated
  • specific temperature
  • optimal
  • enzyme
  • bacterial activity
  • starter cultures
  • rennet
  • fermentation process
  • lactose
  • lactic acid
  • curdle
  • curds and whey
  • cheesecloths
  • drained
  • settling
  • pressed
  • firmer texture
  • salting
  • preservative
  • packaged
  • distribution
  • aged
  • consumed fresh
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