You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Anna, I reached home safely in yesterday night. The train was two hours late departing from London Central Station

due to

the

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apply

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technical issues. Thank you very much for a wonderful holiday and memorable time. I have told my mom about our trips and adventures.

While

I was rushing to pack my bag at your home, I left my

wallet

in your wardrobe.

That is

a blue Gucci

wallet

, which was gifted on my birthday by my mom. In

wallet

has an access card which is required to open my safety cabinet in my office. which I might require in next week. Could you please send the

wallet

with John, he will travel next week to London. I messaged him in the morning and he is willing to pick from your home. I will text you his number on your phone, please send

you

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your

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location to him. See you soon, with love, Jennifer.

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