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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach

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The advent of
technology
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 has changed our daily lives and its usage is constantly on the rise.
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 some education has adopted techniques, others still teach orthodox ways. From my perspective,
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 new approach has both negative and positive effects and I will discuss
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. Perceivably the biggest advantage of the use of
technology
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 in education is the flexibility it offers.
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 is evident in two different ways.
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, it is no longer essential for
students
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 to be present in the classroom for their courses. Distance learning offers lessons through applications
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 as Zoom and Microsoft Teams for adults and
students
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 who are employed or
people
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 in other countries. Teachers and pupils are able to use whiteboards to interact together and
students
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 are attracted by the presentation presented on PowerPoint.
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 stimulates
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’ concentration, and curiosity and even makes lessons more exciting.
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, covid 19 panic has taught us how convenient
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, helping
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 to work in the world uninterrupted.
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, another significant advantage of
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 is saving a lot of time .
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 can arrange a time to study in their free time.
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,
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 the advantages it brings, there are
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 disadvantages.
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 kind of class tends to be less interactive. During online learning,
people
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 often interact with electronic devices rather than with humans, which leads to a lack of human interaction. And even in some cases can lead to separation from others.
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, teachers delivering lectures through the Internet cannot provide instant feedback and support.
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 studying,
students
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 may be affected by external influences that tend to lead to poor quality of
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study. In conclusion,
technology
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 brings many benefits to education but
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 negatives

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