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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach

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The advent of
technology
 has changed our daily lives and its usage is constantly on the rise.
While
 some education has adopted techniques, others still teach orthodox ways. From my perspective,
this
 new approach has both negative and positive effects and I will discuss
this
. Perceivably the biggest advantage of the use of
technology
 in education is the flexibility it offers.
This
 is evident in two different ways.
Firstly
, it is no longer essential for
students
 to be present in the classroom for their courses. Distance learning offers lessons through applications
such
 as Zoom and Microsoft Teams for adults and
students
 who are employed or
people
 in other countries. Teachers and pupils are able to use whiteboards to interact together and
students
 are attracted by the presentation presented on PowerPoint.
This
 stimulates
students
’ concentration, and curiosity and even makes lessons more exciting.
For example
, covid 19 panic has taught us how convenient
technology
, helping
people
 to work in the world uninterrupted.
Moreover
, another significant advantage of
technology
 is saving a lot of time .
People
 can arrange a time to study in their free time.
On the other hand
,
besides
 the advantages it brings, there are
also
 disadvantages.
This
 kind of class tends to be less interactive. During online learning,
people
 often interact with electronic devices rather than with humans, which leads to a lack of human interaction. And even in some cases can lead to separation from others.
Furthermore
, teachers delivering lectures through the Internet cannot provide instant feedback and support.
While
 studying,
students
 may be affected by external influences that tend to lead to poor quality of
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study. In conclusion,
technology
 brings many benefits to education but
also
 negatives
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