You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. You should write at least 250 words.

Smoking is a habit
that is
getting more popular every day among youngsters and adults. Unfortunately, it influences not only smokers but
people
who live, study or work with them too. Some
people
think that smoking should be banned.
Pesonally
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Personally
, I agree with
this
statement and will prove
this
idea in
this
essay.
Firstly
,
people
who do not smoke but have a meeting with a person who
have
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has
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a habit of smoking, are called secondhand smokers. They have an awful impact on their
health
and can suffer harmful
health
effects. Like namely,
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as
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coronary heart disease, stroke, lung cancer, and other diseases. It can
also
result in premature death.
According to
the data, since 1964,
about
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more than 2 million
people
who did not smoke
died
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have died
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from problems caused by secondhand smoke exposure. A
futher
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further
reason why smoking should be cancelled
that
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is that
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is an addiction that influences not only smokers but
people
who are nearby too.
In addition
,
this
awful habit is spreading sharply. It's very easy to start smoking when someone does the same.
People
spend
a
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plenty of time in public places, so smoking should be banned by
government
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the government
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in
piblic
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public
areas to avoid negative influences on
health
. In summary, it could be concluded that smoking
have
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has
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negative impacts on non-smokers too. It should be prohibited to
smole
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smoke
smile
in public
ared
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are
to
refuce
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reduce
the number of
people
who
are suffer
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are suffering
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from serious
health
problems. I predict that the
amount
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number
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of
people
who
smike
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smoke
will fall
due to
hatmful
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harmful
effects.
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