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Some children spend hours every day on the smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Children
 spending hours to lay on
smartphones
 every day may increase these past few times. I think it is often because
parents
 are busy at work,
thus
 they don't have enough time to take care of their loved ones.
On the contrary
, they genuinely provide phones for their
children
 in case they can go with the transformation era in which everything becomes technology based. At present, we will see
children
 addicted to being with
smartphones
 all day long. One of the main reasons that caused
this
 issue to happen is because of their
parents
.
Parents
 nowadays are very busy at work, which imposed them to stay flexible with the 8 to 5 system.
For example
, in the capital city alike Jakarta, many people believe if you want to live a good life and survive daily, both the father and mother in a family should go to work.
This
 event may have caused them to be exhausted and have no leisure time for their
children
 to spend with. In
this
 section, their
children
 may feel lonely because no one is caring for them. It
then
 will raise the
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 of
parents
 to look for a shortcut to solving the problem.
Finally
, they will go to
smartphones
 as the first relive to cope with
this
 case. They believe, all the tools present by
smartphones
such
 as the lights, designs, and animations could fill the loneliness their
children
 encountered.
However
,
children
 are to be encouraged not to be stuck in the prevalence using of
smartphones
, because it will go the damaging of their eyes.
On the other hand
, some
parents
 may think id
smartphones
 should be introduced to kids in their early stages. The reason is because of the transformation in
this
 modern era is dynamic and flexible.
Smartphones
 would be very helpful to accompany kids in their growth times. In conclusion, I can say that giving space to
children
 to play with
smartphones
 is one of the positive ways
parents
 can do if
parents
 keep responsible for any
children
's activities on it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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