You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the loss of my student identification
card
that was lost last
week at the University campus.
I am a fourth-year international medical student, my classes take place on the north campus with the ID card
number 30124SA. I have lost my identification card
and the last
time I saw it was when on Saturday last
week.
The issue that is
most concerning me is the negative impact. For example
, I could not attend some of my classes that required scanning the card
, and I was considered absent though I was physically in class. Another drawback is that I can not register in the public library to borrow studying materials.
I would like to request a new student ID to return to usual
schedule
I hope that you will address these concerns as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Wefag MohamedelhusseinAdd an article
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider adding a concluding statement that summarizes your request briefly.
Task Achievement
Try to elaborate slightly more on how the loss of the ID card has affected your daily academic responsibilities.
Task Achievement
The letter effectively communicates the problem and its impact, clearly advising the reader of the situation.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter is well-structured, using paragraphs effectively to segregate different ideas and sections.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite