You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday Write a letter inviting your friend. In your letter: tell your friend about your birthday explain how much the visit would mean to you suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit

Dear Anna, It's been so long since we met each other

but

Punctuation problem

, but

show examples

I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we spent together

last

Linking Words

year. Do you remember my birthday?

it's

Fix capitalization

It's

show examples

on May 06. As I am planning to move to Alaska next month, I would like to celebrate

this

Linking Words

birthday with all my friends in my

ancestor's

Check wording

ancestors'

show examples

home in Duren. As a childhood friend, I am expecting you to be there to celebrate it. You should

have to

Verb problem

apply

show examples

prepare to stay three days in Duren. The Duren city festival will

be started

Wrong verb form

start

show examples

at that time,

there

Correct word choice

and there

show examples

will be a lot to experience. Don't worry about accommodation, plenty of space is available in my home. I will bake the strawberry tart, you're favourite, though I am a disaster in the kitchen. Let me know your

travelling

Check wording

travel

show examples

plan, I will pick

up you

Correct word order

you up

show examples

at the airport. I can't wait to see you again! With love. Jennifer

ck.manshad

Apr 7, 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement

To improve task response, keep to one clear idea per paragraph and fix small wrong facts, like moving to Alaska or using 'ancestor's home,' to make the message clearer and more true.

coherence and cohesion

To improve coherence, split the letter into clear parts: a greeting, the birthday news, why the visit matters, and the offer to stay at your home. Use simple links to tie ideas together.

tone

Warm and friendly tone.

content

You offer a place to stay at your home.

content

You show you want your friend to be with you on your day.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »- a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Some people believe that it is good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valued to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays there is an argument about whether or not people should give full details in the area of scientific research,business and academics.In the following paragraphs,both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
7
band
In many countries governments are interesting in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?🗿🗿
To deal with society, many governments of countries have invested in modern technological systems. This tendency is the consequence of the lack of civil servants and officials. Spending state budgets on this field is pertinent due to its security and conveniences.
7.5
band
Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you
I hope this letter finds you in good health and best of spirits. I want to thank you for inviting me to join you during the summer vacation. I really enjoyed our Vancouver trip. I guess it was the best ever voyage that I had in my life and the photos that we collected are also fabulous. I appreciate that you have posted me all the pictures and memories that we collected.
7.5
band
In many countries around the world, young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples.
In several nations globally, the younger generation prefers to live alone or with friends right after graduation. This essay agrees that this is a positive development as it fosters growth and individuality among the youth.
7.5
band
Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's digital age, some people believe that teaching art like drawing and painting is as chief to the development of children as other school subjects, so it should be taught like main subjects in high schools. It is the opinion of this writer that art should be taught like those subjects because art helps children become more intelligent, and creative and in the future they will perhaps have more job opportunities.

You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday Write a letter inviting your friend. In your letter: tell your friend about your birthday explain how much the visit would mean to you suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit

The Closing

Some people believe that it is good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valued to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries governments are interesting in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?🗿🗿

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

In many countries around the world, young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples.

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?