Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The way of improving

road

safety is one of the most urgent

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that

people

need to

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serious considerations. In

this

situation, some argue that

road

accidents

can be prevented by

rising

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raising

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the legal minimum

age

of getting driving

lisenses

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licenses

for a car or motorbike which

need

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needs

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to drive

throught

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through

roads, but not the

side-walk

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sidewalk

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.

On

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the

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contrary to

this

argument,

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others believe

this

idea

do

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not work for reducing

accidents

happened

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happening

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on roads. I strongly agree with the

later

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opinion because it is no

relations

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between the driver's

age

and the frequency of

accidents

,

moreover

, there are other reasons which require to be more strict than

age

limitations

such

as driving with

alcohole

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alcohol

and

a

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treatment for elderly

drivers

.

Firstly

, the larger reason

of

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for

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driving

accidents

has caused by

having

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alcohol

while

driving,

this

does not connect with the

age

of

drivers

.

For example

, in Japan, the

driver

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driver's

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lisence

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licence

license

allows

people

to drive

since

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from

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they are 18 years old,

people

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and people

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can legally drink

alcohole

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alcohol

from 20 years old.

Moreover

, the younger generation tends to ask their parents for picking them up. It can be said that there

are

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a lower possibility for

young

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generation to become

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drunken

drivers

.

Additonally

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Additionally

,

drunked

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drunken

drunk

drivers

are more likely to happen by

the

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middle

age

to drive without

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careful

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due to

their confidence

of

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in

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driving. So,

drunked

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drunken

driving

shoud

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should

be regarded

more

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as more

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heavey

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heavy

issues

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than

age

restrictions.

Secondly

, the poor

recognision

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recognition

and performance of elderly

drivers

also

have led

lots

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of

road

accidents

every year, and the maximum legal

age

had better be considered than

minimum

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age

. In the system of

driver

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driver's

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lisence

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licenses

,

drivers

do not expire of their lisence

onece

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once

they get it, except for a huge violation. It means that

people

who have physical difficulties like poor

eye sight

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, hard for hearing and slow recognition as getting older are still recognised the same as how they used to be without these symptoms. The treatment

to

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this

situation needs more prioritised solutions to protect

people

from

road

accidents

.

To sum up

, the restriction toward legal

age

for

lisences

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licences

can not be the solution

of

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to

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building

safety

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safe

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road

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due to

the lacking of understanding about the other factors which occur

road

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in road

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accidents

.

Therefore

, I barely agree with

this

idea and I believe other causes of

accidents

should be focused

more

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.