Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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These days, there is a controversy about implementing the
laws
limiting the amount of
noise
. Some people expect many advantages from them.
However
, I think it has more disadvantages than pros. On the one hand, by imposing those
laws
, the government will get fewer complaints.
This
is because the limitation of
noise
makes people concentrate on something, not suffering from distractions.
For example
, in Korea, there were fruit trucks that
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on a loud radio to advertise themselves in the daytime. Since it disturbed students in studying at school, students complained about it to the city administration. After restricting that activity
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laws
, they could focus on their classes, and the public servants did not have to deal with those complaints.
Nevertheless
, the development of countries will be able to be disturbed.
This
is because there are some noises that cannot be controlled.
For instance
, constructing buildings is a compulsory task
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countries.
However
, unfortunately, it is difficult to decrease the amount of
noise
made by using machines to move or compile materials.
Thus
, to follow the restrictions, they cannot make advanced ones.
Furthermore
, the degree of the disturbance people feel by each
noise
is too subjective. Even though the
laws
limit the level of
noise
, some individuals can be still distracted. Studies have shown that each participant responded differently to the same level of sounds. In conclusion, it is true that there is a noticeable advantage to the
laws
.
However
, the uncertainty of the objective standard and slow development make the cons of the
laws
overweigh
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the pros.
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