Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to him to tell him that you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter: -Apologize -Explain the situation -Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket

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Dear Harry, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I got your letter

last

Saturday in which you mentioned the plan to watch The Hero Man play at the Hilton

theatre

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Theatre

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next 14th from 10 am to 1 pm. I feel bad to tell you that I can’t be there with you and I apologize from the core of my heart for

this

. The reason behind

this

is a sudden change in the upcoming airshow in our town on

this

identical date. After a horrific accident of my senior pilot Mr. Anderson, who was leading

this

show, I got the charge of

this

show and the presentation of the F-35 Raptor fighter plane

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a herculean task.

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, I have

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a lot of responsibilities on my shoulders though I know It’s been a long time since we met and I really did not want to lose

this

chance.

However

, I’m helpless and if you don’t mind, I can talk to Sandra to be my replacement. Since she just finished her examinations, she requires a good activity like

this

and I am sure she will be good company for you. I hope you’ll understand my situation. Yours lovingly, Jacob

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coherence cohesion

The letter is well-organized and has good structure. To make it even better, try to ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea more clearly.

task achievement

Your response is complete and addresses all parts of the task effectively. However, you might want to be slightly more concise and to the point in explaining the situation.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and cordial, creating a friendly tone throughout the letter.

task achievement

The overall writing tone is suitable and well-matched for a letter to a friend.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

199 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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