Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

a number of folk notion have a positive attitude toward for change of infrastructure of agricultural products
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, some mankind have an opposite idea about that and they think, it will prone of threat to health. in
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say my notion. on the one hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that genetically
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highly beneficial for people. they insist that
firstly
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innovation has happened with a strong scientific reference.
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, nowadays scientists in laboratories after complex exams produce these new crops. so, the rate of risk of these productions
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very low likely.
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,
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phenomenon has an economic advantage for administration and Poverty is reduced in developing countries because the
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raised drastically in these regions so the government are able to spread among citizens equally.
on the other hand
, many commentators justifiably argue that there are some drawbacks
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method. it seems to them,
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happening maybe have some health problems for mankind as the nature of these new products
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unknown
therefore
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, I don't find
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research about these crops. in conclusion, I strongly agree that its positive aspects are noticeable in economic and social justice. India is
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • genetically modified crops
  • positive development
  • potentially dangerous
  • increased food production
  • improved nutrition
  • reduction in the use of
  • pesticides
  • herbicides
  • enhanced crop resistance
  • pests
  • diseases
  • drought-resistant crops
  • potential environmental harm
  • unknown long-term effects
  • human health
  • cross-contamination
  • non-GMO crops
  • balanced approach
  • careful monitoring
  • regulation
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