Many people believe that social media sites ( such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society
Most our health.
people
think that social media Use synonyms
for instance
Instagram or Linking Words
Facebook
have had a huge negative effect on individuals Use synonyms
people
as well society and communities. Use synonyms
However
, I believe that social networks are beneficial for Linking Words
people
. I agree that Use synonyms
this
thought. It is Linking Words
exactly
damaging impactAdd an article
the exactly
Change preposition
on
To begin
with, nowadays all Linking Words
people
have social media on their mobile Use synonyms
phone
. The effect online social network has had on each individual person. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
In addition
, some Linking Words
people
brought social media all day Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
Facebook
Use synonyms
whereas
before developing new technologies, most Linking Words
people
have the option to meet and communicate with someone outside of their immediate circle and community. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
Facebook
Use synonyms
also
has social groups namely, some individuals have a chance to meet and take part in discussions with Linking Words
people
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the effect that Linking Words
Facebook
almost all Use synonyms
people
can only be seen as negative. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Consequently
many Add a comma
,Consequently
people
within the local community are no longer forming close or supportive relationships. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, society is becoming increasingly. As Linking Words
people
spend full time online with Use synonyms
people
they have never met face to face with Use synonyms
person
, who they were unlikely to ever meet in the future.
Add an article
a person
the person
To sum up
,Linking Words
the
social network Correct article usage
apply
part
of our lives. Because almost all Add a missing verb
are part
people
have kept in touch with every person through online sites. Shortly speaking, some Use synonyms
people
point out that Use synonyms
this
site impacts our lives. Local communities should do more to try and involve local Linking Words
people
in local activities in order to promote the future of community lifeUse synonyms
Submitted by omondavlat91 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?