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Some people belive that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others think that students of all ages and ability levels should be able to attend. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Few of them are of the opinion that
students
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 with excellent academic grades should be admitted,
while
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 others think that pupils of all age groups with
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 should be accepted in
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. The primary reason why some of them think so is most
universities
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 have eligibility criteria and I think
students
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 should be accepted based on their
skills
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. Most
universities
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 have eligibility criteria
while
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 accepting
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 reason being, they choose
students
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 with good grades as they think that
students
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 will be able to cope with the classes which invariably affects the ranking of these
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.
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, Ivy League
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 accept only
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 with high grades. Getting into
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 like Harvard or Yale is very difficult as very few
students
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 meet their requirements. 
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, there are few
universities
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 which accept
students
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 based on their work experience or other
skills
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 as they have more practical knowledge of how to apply their
skills
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 to the practical world.
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,
while
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this
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 can be a drawback for most
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 I think
universities
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 should be more open to admitting
students
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 with talent and giving them an opportunity to present their
skills
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.
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 giving importance to only educational scores,
universities
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 should have an entrance exam for
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students
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 in order to test their practical knowledge.
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, some
universities
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 have an entrance exam which gives an opportunity for
students
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 to score well before admitting them.
Students
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 choosing MBBS have to clear the entrance exam.
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,
students
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 should not be judged based on their academics and rather give them an opportunity to learn.
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, having
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 requirements will only demotivate
students
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 who may not have had great scores.
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