A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, – describe what this book was about – explain how this book influenced you – say whether this book would be likely to influence other people Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to suggest a book
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to
magazines'
article called 'The Change noun form
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book
that influenced me most'. My name is Milav Soni and I like to read you
magazines.
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Firstly
, I would like to inform more
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you more
book
, which I Add an article
the book
a book
have
completed just two weeks before. The title of Unnecessary verb
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book
is 'Harry Add an article
the book
potter
and the Goblet of Fire'. Correct your spelling
Potter
This
book
is about a character name
Harry, and how Correct your spelling
named
challanges
and obstacles are suffered by him. Correct your spelling
challenges
Moreover
, it is also
about how Harry used his magic to solve all problems that faced during his competitions.
Secondly
, what made this
book
particularly influenced
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me was the fast-paced action and the thrilling plot. I really liked the way how Change preposition
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solved his problem and helped all Correct your spelling
Harry
other
students. The challenges that he Correct article usage
the other
faces
in the tournament were very well-written.
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Lastly
, I think, this
is the best book
for readers because this
story is going to learn them how to think positively in bad situations. In addition
, they also
encouraged how to help other people in all conditions. I believe that this
book
kept them on the edge of their seat throughout the book
.
If you need any further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite