A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, – describe what this book was about – explain how this book influenced you – say whether this book would be likely to influence other people Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to suggest a
book
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article called 'The
book
that influenced me most'. My name is Milav Soni and I like to read
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magazines.
Firstly
, I would like to inform
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about
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, which I
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completed just two weeks before. The title of
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is 'Harry
potter
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and the Goblet of Fire'.
This
book
is about a character
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Harry, and how
challanges
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challenges
and obstacles are suffered by him.
Moreover
, it is
also
about how Harry used his magic to solve all problems that faced during his competitions.
Secondly
, what made
this
book
particularly
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me was the fast-paced action and the thrilling plot. I really liked the way how
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solved his problem and helped all
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students. The challenges that he
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in the tournament were very well-written.
Lastly
, I think,
this
is the best
book
for readers because
this
story is going to learn them how to think positively in bad situations.
In addition
, they
also
encouraged how to help other people in all conditions. I believe that
this
book
kept them on the edge of their seat throughout the
book
. If you need any
further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
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