It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes daimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss hoth these views and give your own opinion.

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good in any

skill

.

However

, some

people

are born with talents like good voice and physic,

while

some ordinary

people

have to learn

skills

and can become good

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. I believe it has some

advantage

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to

born

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be born

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with certain

talent

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talents

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but an ordinary individual can master any

skills

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practice

. I discussed both

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viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with,

people

me some hidden born

talent

are one step ahead in certain

skills

. They can adapt

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skills

easily to master

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.

For instance

, if someone is born with good vocals, he/she has an advantage in singing. Singing can become his/her career because of

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voice. He/she is one step ahead in

this

specific

skill

.

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, children born with

talent

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higher as compared to other. On the other end, it is widely believed that any child can be taught

become

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best

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the best

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in any

skill

. It is possible to achieve success in any

skill

whether it is sports or music.

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is the key to

achieve

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success in any area.

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sprinters used to

practice

for decades for one Olympic event. They

practice

running without skipping even a day.

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rigorous

training leads them to achieve medals in events .

Furthermore

, Usain Bolt, the fastest runner in the world,

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born with any

talent

. His years of hard work and patience paybacks him the first position in the world.

Hence

,

practice

and hard work are the key points to be noted to achieve anything in life.

To conclude

, it is good to be born with

talent

and good in any

skill

that an individual has an advantage in achieving his/her goal.

However

,

by

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doing hard work and intense

practice

can help anyone to reach

at

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that level of

people

who are born with

talent

.

By teaching

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a person will help to achieve perfection in any

skill

.