The shown charts provide information on the way of dealing with insecure garbage products in three different governments.

The shown charts provide information on the way of dealing with insecure garbage products in three different governments.
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The shown charts provide information on the way of dealing with insecure garbage
products
in three different governments.
Overall
, it is seen from pictorials that hiding waste
products
underground is the most popular method,
while
incineration is the least used all over the three countries. First of all, putting the
products
underground takes a very large proportion of dealing with in the UK,
while
in Korea and
Sweden
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it is almost 2 out of 10 and just over a half, respectively.
By contrast
, burning the
products
has the smallest percentages, which is 2% in
UK
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, 9% in Korea and 20% in Sweden. Getting back to the details, it is worth noticing that chemical treatment and dumping at sea exist only in the UK,
whereas
recycling is in the usage in
other
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two countries. Both chemical and dumping treatments have the same proportions, which are 8%. Meanwhile, recycling in
Republic
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of Korea is 69% and in Sweden is one quarter.
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