The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
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The diagram illustrates the life cycle of
salmon
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from the spawning period to adultness,
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, it can be clearly seen the detailed phases that
salmon
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undergo in order to ensure the life process, from the spawning
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in the river to the growth
stage
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in the ocean, Glancing at the diagram reveals that
salmon
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migrates to the river in order to incubate the eggs, prior to
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stage
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, the spawning period is the first phase, following
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, after the
salmon
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eggs hatch the next
stage
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is rearing in the river where the water is suitable for
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first adventure, at
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point
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the
salmon
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migrates back to the ocean before which lives a
stage
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named ESTUARY REARING,
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, the
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2 stages are reaching the rearing nets,
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salmon
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remain in these areas to grow to maturity in order to start over the same life cycle from the beginning,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, stage with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Salmon
  • Spawn
  • Egg
  • Alevin
  • Fry
  • Parr
  • Smolt
  • Freshwater
  • Saltwater
  • Adaptation
  • Physiological changes
  • Habitat
  • Predators
  • Survival
  • Ecosystem
  • Migratory patterns
  • Reproductive cycle
  • Environmental factors
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