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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes air pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays travelling by means of an airline is much more liked by people. Pollution is an alarming problem which is arising by many means of transport from which
air
 pollution is equally the main of cause it. In
this
 essay, I will support my view with examples of the former argument. On the one hand, means of transport are a necessary part of daily life. The reason for it is people are not feeling comfortable commuting on roads or water as it is much riskier. It is a passenger-friendly option to
travel
 by
air
. For e.g: If someone wants to
travel
 to the USA from Canada, at that moment they will prefer aeroplanes because there is a huge inconvenience as compared to other choices.
Additionally
, flights are a speedy mode of travelling. It helps to save time when people are in hurry and needs quick movement.
For instance
, Prime Ministers of many countries are travelling by aeroplane because of seminars, meetings, and conferences. If they choose to
travel
 through other modes like roads or water, it will be a waste of money and time as well.
Furthermore
, travelling by
air
 is chosen widely over the other modes of
travel
 when it comes to saving time.
To conclude
 in
this
, there is no doubt
air
travel
 is a good option to transit across the world. I slightly agree that it causes
air
 pollution
therefore
, the economic and global benefits outweigh these issues.
Air
travel
 is one of the heavily adopted means of transportation because of its several benefits and I strongly support
air
travel
 in every sphere of the globe.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant contributor
  • pollution
  • carbon emissions
  • restrict
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • environmentally friendly
  • technological advancements
  • economic benefits
  • environmental concerns
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