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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Nowadays, getting to know more about the history of the accommodation where people live in become gradually more interesting
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 them. It is true that there are some causes why
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, it is the demand on having
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 appealing
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, because currently, the living standard of citizens is getting better day by day.
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 livelihood. With the development of
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 today, one person can be easy to have a job to adapt
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 to look into the closest stuff with them, and their house would be the best.
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becomes
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. It might be through their
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 because they could know a lot of stories happening around their house.
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, the first option to find
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 chosen would be through the
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people
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 in the present, because all of them would have at least one digital device by side them.
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 would be the first behave appearing in their mind, especially young adults. And
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 causes and the convenience to explore information, individuals are more excited to find the old stories of their living place is tremendously understandable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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