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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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more and more
people
 have
health
 problems
due to
 many artificial foods and drinks adding a lot of
sugar
. Some
people
 think the
price
 of sugary
goods
 should be more expensive in order to make the public eat less
sugar
. In my opinion,
although
 the higher cost of sugary products can be effectively prevented
health
 problems of
people
, there are more effective ways to deal with
this
 situation.
Thus
, I disagree
this
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 view. On the one hand, increasing the money on sugary
goods
 can quickly solve the public's
health
 problems. Because of the higher cost of living
people
 usually can not afford the huge
price
 of products.
Whereas
,
sugar
 is a necessary thing in our daily life and provided energy for us. If the way is just easily improved
sugar
 payment, it will lead to negative influence,
for example
, somebody suffering from a blood illness who needs
sugar
 to keep healthy will pay more money every day.
As a result
,
this
 situation will confuse more public.
On the other hand
, there are more effective and less negative impact ways can solve
this
 problem.
Firstly
, governments can spread the harm of the diseases caused by eating sugary
goods
such
 as heart diseases, blood diseases and so forth. Making
people
 afraid of the results of eating too much sugary food and drink.
In addition
, reducing the
price
 of
health
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goods
 is an efficient way to help
people
 to gain a healthy life. It is logical to suppose that
people
 will choose more healthy
goods
 if the prices are the same. In conclusion, compared with
this
 way there are more effective ways to solve
this
 problem.
Therefore
, I disagree that increasing the
price
 of sugary
goods
 can remain the
health
 of the public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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