Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

more and more

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have

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problems

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many artificial foods and drinks adding a lot of

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. Some

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think the

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of sugary

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should be more expensive in order to make the public eat less

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. In my opinion,

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the higher cost of sugary products can be effectively prevented

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problems of

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, there are more effective ways to deal with

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situation.

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, I disagree

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view. On the one hand, increasing the money on sugary

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can quickly solve the public's

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problems. Because of the higher cost of living

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usually can not afford the huge

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of products.

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,

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is a necessary thing in our daily life and provided energy for us. If the way is just easily improved

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payment, it will lead to negative influence,

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, somebody suffering from a blood illness who needs

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to keep healthy will pay more money every day.

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,

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situation will confuse more public.

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, there are more effective and less negative impact ways can solve

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problem.

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, governments can spread the harm of the diseases caused by eating sugary

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as heart diseases, blood diseases and so forth. Making

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afraid of the results of eating too much sugary food and drink.

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, reducing the

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goods

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is an efficient way to help

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to gain a healthy life. It is logical to suppose that

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will choose more healthy

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if the prices are the same. In conclusion, compared with

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way there are more effective ways to solve

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problem.

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, I disagree that increasing the

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of sugary

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can remain the

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of the public.