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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Modern social order consists of obligatory items and some prohibitions. These guiding  principles are necessary to be followed to preserve the integrity of
society
 by clearly demarcating the do’s and don’ts.
Therefore
 without it, our
society
 couldn’t exist
as well as
 it now. I align myself with
this
 statement and in
this
 essay, I’ll drop my opinion.
To begin
 with,
society
 is created through various communities with people of distinct points of view.
In addition
, each of them has completely different principles and representations of what can and can’t be done.
Hence
, it’s incredibly crucial to keep them in peace and harmony by some
rules
 and
laws
.
Otherwise
, I think we would live in chaos where everyone could want to approve their viewpoint not only by peaceful means.
On the other hand
, today the values of things, cultural heritage, money, and even life are valued only at the expense of
laws
 and
rules
. It means that without them nothing would be appreciated in
this
 world.
For instance
, in a
society
 without
rules
, it would be acceptable to murder a person gratuitously.
Finally
, it can notice easily that humanity must be restricted by at least human norms,
not to mention
 workers’
laws
 and so on. In conclusion,
rules
 and
laws
 have been developed for centuries in order to satisfy a person’s desire. There are only negative aspects in the way living in an unprincipled
society
. So in my opinion, it is extremely necessary to follow them and preserve
this
 peaceful
society
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