Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, some
people
believe that the necessity of saying
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language
when
people
live abroad may lead to all kinds of negative influences. Personally, I strongly agree with
this
opinion. On the one hand,
this
kind of
language
barrier may cause lots of difficulties in our daily life.
Firstly
,
people
are likely to misunderstand native speakers' words, which may lead to some unnecessary conflicts.
For example
, I used to serve one of my foreign friends a mug of apple juice when he told me that he need some grape juice.
Actually
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he is allergic to apples and in
this
case,
language
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barrier causes a bad result which could have been avoided.
Secondly
,
people
living in
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foreign countries may struggle with going out like taking public transportation
due to
the fact that almost every sign
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the
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language
he is not familiar with.
On the other hand
, having to speak a foreign
language
may
result
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some psychological problems. Since some of the social problems are unavoidable, a considerable part of
people
may prefer staying at home or dormitory, rather than going out to socialize with foreigners,
thus
producing some mental problems,
such
as social anxiety.
Moreover
, these psychological
disablities
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disabilities
could even lead to some worse results.
For example
, some may turn to affect others if they are unable to have
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life which meets their expectations,
thus
probaly
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causing criminals. In conclusion,
cosidering
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considering
the listed detrimental results
language
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barrier can lead to, I do agree with
this
statement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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