Some people think thet space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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Scientists
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belive
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believe
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environment
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develope
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researches
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research
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exploration so theres
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, for example,
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faster and safer planes and other transport machines.
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conclusion that Correct pronoun usage
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travel and exploration is a long term
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long-term
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