Some people think thet space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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other planets are a very fascinating
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because we have a lot of
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information about them.
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and engineers are working hard to develop
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travelling and invent new tools which help int he exploration. Every
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has a huge risk. We can say that 50% that the business will be successful and 50% that
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will be
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to
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that we can’t see the planets or the black hole.
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a lot of
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and
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like a mystery and
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to accept it.
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there are other unsolved problems
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the polluted
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developing counties.
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the population is dramatically growing and next to
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we have to
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good way where
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can expand and
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new materials and other
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Humanity.
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technology is developing during
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and
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space
exploration so
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faster and safer planes and other transport machines. In
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conclusion that
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travel and exploration is a
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business and we need to spend a lot of money but it will
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it. We don’t know yet what will they find but
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knowledge and technology will be growing and become better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • astronomical costs
  • earthbound issues
  • tangible benefits
  • technological spin-offs
  • innovation
  • long-term investment
  • habitability
  • interplanetary travel
  • sustainable exploration
  • spacefaring nations
  • international collaboration
  • deep space
  • the final frontier
  • cosmic perspective
  • frontiers of science
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