You live in a room in college which you share with another student. There are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, - describe the situation - explain the problems and why is it difficult to work - say how you would like the situation resolved

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my current dormitory situation. I kindly request your attention to
this
matter and to find a solution as soon as possible.
To begin
with, I share a bathroom with two other flatmates. Unfortunately, despite numerous requests, two of them have not been cleaning the bathroom.
Moreover
, one of my roommates frequently brings her boyfriend over at night and the resulting noises are making it difficult for me to get a good night's rest. I have tried to resolve these issues by speaking to them in a polite manner, but unfortunately, nothing has changed so far.
Therefore
, I would appreciate it if you could take disciplinary action against my housemates. If
this
doesn't resolve the situation, I would like to request a single room. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter, and I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Heekyung Kim
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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