The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The line graph gives information about how many tourists visited a Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
In general, the number of tourists all
went up to some degree, and the Correct pronoun usage
apply
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
visitors
who stayed on cruise ships was a little more than the visitors
Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
stayed
on Correct pronoun usage
who stayed
island
in 2017.
Obviously, there was a significant increase in the number of Add an article
the island
an island
visitors
staying on cruise ships, which increased from less than 0.5 million
to 2 million
, during the whole period, exceeding that of their counterparts who stayed on island
after 2015. Correct article usage
the island
Moreover
, there was a slight rise of 0.75 million
in the quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
visitors
staying on island
between 2010 and 2015, after which it fell to 1.25 Add an article
the island
an island
million
until 2016, followed by another increased
back to 1.5 Replace the word
increase
million
in 2017. The number of visitors
who like staying on island
became the smallest over the period from 2010 to 2017. Add an article
the island
In addition
, a smooth upward trend occurred in the amount of total, which increased from 1 million
to 3 million
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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