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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The line graph gives information about how many tourists visited a Caribbean
island
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 from 2010 to 2017. In general, the number of tourists
all
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went up to some degree, and the
quantity
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number
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 of
visitors
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 who stayed on cruise ships was a little more than the
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visitors
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number of visitors
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stayed
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who stayed
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 on
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island
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the island
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 in 2017. Obviously, there was a significant increase in the number of
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships, which increased from less than 0.5
million
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 to 2
million
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, during the whole period, exceeding that of their counterparts who stayed on
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island
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the island
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 after 2015.
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, there was a slight rise of 0.75
million
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 in the
quantity
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number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on
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island
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the island
an island
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 between 2010 and 2015, after which it fell to 1.25
million
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 until 2016, followed by another
increased
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 back to 1.5
million
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 in 2017. The number of
visitors
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 who like staying on
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island
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the island
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 became the smallest over the period from 2010 to 2017.
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, a smooth upward trend occurred in the amount of total, which increased from 1
million
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 to 3
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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