You recently did a short course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am Harvey, living at 5364 Forest Road, Canterberry 2036. I am writing to you with regard giving feedback on short-term cookery
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which I did from your school. First of all, I am delighted to say that
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which I attempt from January to April 2023, I enjoyed it a lot. The most favourable thing is the behaviour of a professional chef who guides us and clears students' doubts without being annoyed.
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, I only paid 375 pounds for
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in which I learnt how to prepare bakery food with the finest finishing.
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,
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helps me by enhancing my knowledge of how one can use another sweet savoury if a particular
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not available. I
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prepared several pastries and cakes for my loved ones.
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, all my family, friends and relatives appreciate my culinary skills and
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status. I only achieve
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because of
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which I completed. Now, I would like it if
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cooking Academy
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offer veggies courses in which one can learn how to chop different veggies in different shapes and sizes. So that I will prepare the veggies salad in the span of time. I hope you would like my suggestion and will provide
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Harvey.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • course structure
  • teaching methods
  • skills gained
  • cuisines
  • dishes
  • cooking regime
  • apply skills
  • personal preferences
  • lasting impact
  • specific cuisine
  • cooking style
  • course offerings
  • advanced courses
  • specialized courses
  • food trends
  • dietary needs
  • class timings
  • online options
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