You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rohit, I am writing

this

letter to say thank you for your great action on the day of the accident. And, I would like to invite you for the family dinner as a sign of my gratitude. My name is Heena Chadda. I am single, living with some of my friends in Mississauga. My place is located in the centre of the city, near the heartland. It will be easy for you to reach by considering the landmark. In fact, I am very amazed to hear from my family that, how kindly you cared for me during my recovery days. You stayed in the hospital with my family, and even, donated your blood to me. I really appreciate you from the depth of my heart.

Moreover

, my family has organised a dinner party

this

Sunday at 8 PM. I would like to invite you with your whole family. My parents want to thank you for your noble action towards me during my bad days. Thank you so much for everything you did for me. I hope you will accept my invitation. I am so glad to see you soon. Yours lovingly Heena Chadda

Submitted by heenachadda1 on Mon Apr 24 2023

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8 paragraphs

194 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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